Update 2.16.18 release notes

Change-Id: Ie573e52512b4f20b4eec351f3a0fd078991750c9
diff --git a/pages/site/releases/2.16.md b/pages/site/releases/2.16.md
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@@ -623,22 +623,31 @@
 * Breaking Changes
 
   * [Issue 12527](https://bugs.chromium.org/p/gerrit/issues/detail?id=12527):
-  Remove support for discontinued Elasticsearch v5.6, v6.0 up to v6.4.
+  Elasticsearch: Support for EOL versions v5.6 and v6.0 to v6.4 is discontinued
 
-  * Plugin API: Remove deprecated draft workflow methods, remove deprecated ChangeApi.getEdit method.
+  * Plugin API: Deprecated methods related to the draft workflow and change edits are removed
 
-  * Metrics: make cache disk stat metric computation optional.
+    * `ChangeApi.getEdit()`
+    * `ChangeApi.publish()`
+    * `RevisionApi.delete()`
+    * `RevisionApi.publish()`
 
-    Disable the cache disks stat metrics for persistent caches by default
-    because is a very expensive and can block a thread for several minutes on
-    larger installations.
+  * Metrics: Cache disk stat metric computation is disabled by default
+
+    Calculation of the cache disks stat metrics for persistent caches is disabled
+    by default because it is a very expensive operation that can block a thread for
+    several minutes on larger installations.
+
+    Installations that still want to use this metric must explicitly enable it with the
+    [cache.enableDiskStatMetrics](http://gerrit-documentation.storage.googleapis.com/Documentation/2.16.18/config-gerrit.html#cache.enableDiskStatMetrics)
+    configuration option.
 
 * New Features
 
-  * Make legacy version of the commit-msg hook available
+  * Make legacy version of the `commit-msg` hook available
 
-    Make the older version of the commit-msg hook from gerrit 2.15.x,
-    which does not use git-intepret-trailers, available from the site so that
+    Make the older version of the `commit-msg` hook from gerrit 2.15.x,
+    which does not use `git-intepret-trailers`, available from the site so that
     users who have an older client can download it.
 
 * Bug Fixes
@@ -655,7 +664,7 @@
 * PolyGerrit UI Fixes
 
   * [Issue 12385](https://bugs.chromium.org/p/gerrit/issues/detail?id=12385):
-  Fix for Memory leak in gr-plugin-endpoints.
+  Fix memory leak in `gr-plugin-endpoints`.
 
 * Library Upgrades
 
@@ -667,19 +676,23 @@
   * [Issue 12448](https://bugs.chromium.org/p/gerrit/issues/detail?id=12448):
   Switch to using no-AOP Guice distribution
 
-    Switch to using Guice without AOP feature altogether: guice-x.y.z-no_aop.jar for
-    supporting more easily newer JDK versions.
+    This allows to more easily support newer JDK versions.
+
+  * [Issue 14242](https://bugs.chromium.org/p/gerrit/issues/detail?id=12424):
+  Upgrade gwtjsonrpc to 1.12
+
+    This fixes email token verification failures caused by non-URL-encoded characters.
 
 * Security Fixes
 
   * [Issue 8952](https://bugs.chromium.org/p/gerrit/issues/detail?id=8952):
-  Do not require explicit "Push Tag" rights to refs/tags/* for pushing an annotated tag over HTTPS.
+  Do not require explicit "Push Tag" rights to `refs/tags/*` for pushing an annotated tag over HTTPS.
 
-* Replication plugin fixes
+* Replication Plugin Fixes
 
   * Improve logging of why a project or ref is not replicated.
 
-  * Documentation: clarify the limitations of gerrit+ssh in v2.16.
+  * Documentation: clarify the limitations of `gerrit+ssh` in v2.16.
 
 ### 2.16.17