tree 3c821273a1fa5d349d4f0250c892bc532b58ec7d
parent 54a643c159e8385d09426710be8f2167ba800263
author curt <MichaelCurtissPatrick@gmail.com> 1555703613 -0700
committer Luca Milanesio <luca.milanesio@gmail.com> 1556224737 +0000

Edit the design doc for readability.  No content changes.

Changes include:
- Correct some grammar and spelling inconsistencies I noticed.
- Where possible, make it less verbose.
- Use a more active voice (which tends to be less verbose as well).

Change-Id: I29998fafdf0486196339133eaca0a52c6cf1afd2